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		<title>Comment on Same Bible, different views by Aaron Hull</title>
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		<dc:creator>Aaron Hull</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 May 2012 11:51:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Totally agree with you on this one. There&#039;s no reason a government should have any oversight with a religious/social relationship.</description>
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		<title>Comment on In defense of partnerships by Traveling Hypothesis &#187; Same Bible, different views</title>
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		<dc:creator>Traveling Hypothesis &#187; Same Bible, different views</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 May 2012 19:45:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] before, I am no more for homosexual marriages than heterosexual ones. The government ought to get out of the marriage-business as it is a religious construct which has no place in a government which separates belief from [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Time to read teen-fiction by Aaron Hull</title>
		<link>http://rjz.verminbrewing.com/2012/03/29/time-to-read-teen-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-31166</link>
		<dc:creator>Aaron Hull</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Apr 2012 14:44:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Popularity doesn&#039;t necessarily mean that the people chose to read a book because of the quality of the writing. I read 2 Dan Brown books and was well aware of how badly written they were. They read amazingly quickly, as do many of these modern potboilers that wrap a novel around some idea or philosophy, so I didn&#039;t mind putting up with it. 2 years ago I read all the Harry Potter books because I decided it was enough of a cultural &quot;thing&quot; that I should probably be familiar with if I wanted to express any kind of well-founded opinion. I was well aware of its literary limitations. After hearing Salman Rushdie&#039;s comments on Slumdog Millionaire I decided to read &quot;Midnight&#039;s Children&quot; so that I could evaluate where he was coming from (not to mention if his writing was worth the famous fatwa for Satanic Verses). The last half of the book started to drag for me, but I continued regardless. More recently, I just finished reading Joseph Conrad&#039;s &quot;The Secret Agent&quot; because it was on my iphone, sounded interesting and I never read &quot;Heart of Darkness&quot; in high school. Brilliant.

All these books have different densities of writing. But the result was the same. I finished reading them. Now what? What &quot;rewards&quot; have I reaped from them? Would reading Focault&#039;s Pendulum instead of the Da Vinci Code have changed my life in any way for the better or worse? I wrote a piece of fan fiction after reading Harry Potter, so I guess I can at least quantify that. Midnight&#039;s Children gave me insight into the modern history of India, Pakistan and Bangladesh. Maybe in the future I will be able to compare it favorably or disfavorably to the Bollywood movie they&#039;ve currently finished filming. Maybe I&#039;ll eventually write something about &quot;The Secret Agent&quot; or use some of the techniques I observed in my own writing. 

When I said &quot;I tend to believe that most people intuitively know when something isn’t so good.&quot; I chose my words carefully. I know full well that they are probably not truthful. But I observe myself  deciding to behave in a way that presumes that they are. That has more to do with how I want to behave than how I want everybody else to behave. It&#039;s their choice and it&#039;s not my place to convince people to enjoy something. They&#039;re on their path and they&#039;ll discover it eventually(or not). But maybe I&#039;m overly apathetic. What do you feel are the rewards of reading quality literature?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Popularity doesn&#8217;t necessarily mean that the people chose to read a book because of the quality of the writing. I read 2 Dan Brown books and was well aware of how badly written they were. They read amazingly quickly, as do many of these modern potboilers that wrap a novel around some idea or philosophy, so I didn&#8217;t mind putting up with it. 2 years ago I read all the Harry Potter books because I decided it was enough of a cultural &#8220;thing&#8221; that I should probably be familiar with if I wanted to express any kind of well-founded opinion. I was well aware of its literary limitations. After hearing Salman Rushdie&#8217;s comments on Slumdog Millionaire I decided to read &#8220;Midnight&#8217;s Children&#8221; so that I could evaluate where he was coming from (not to mention if his writing was worth the famous fatwa for Satanic Verses). The last half of the book started to drag for me, but I continued regardless. More recently, I just finished reading Joseph Conrad&#8217;s &#8220;The Secret Agent&#8221; because it was on my iphone, sounded interesting and I never read &#8220;Heart of Darkness&#8221; in high school. Brilliant.</p>
<p>All these books have different densities of writing. But the result was the same. I finished reading them. Now what? What &#8220;rewards&#8221; have I reaped from them? Would reading Focault&#8217;s Pendulum instead of the Da Vinci Code have changed my life in any way for the better or worse? I wrote a piece of fan fiction after reading Harry Potter, so I guess I can at least quantify that. Midnight&#8217;s Children gave me insight into the modern history of India, Pakistan and Bangladesh. Maybe in the future I will be able to compare it favorably or disfavorably to the Bollywood movie they&#8217;ve currently finished filming. Maybe I&#8217;ll eventually write something about &#8220;The Secret Agent&#8221; or use some of the techniques I observed in my own writing. </p>
<p>When I said &#8220;I tend to believe that most people intuitively know when something isn’t so good.&#8221; I chose my words carefully. I know full well that they are probably not truthful. But I observe myself  deciding to behave in a way that presumes that they are. That has more to do with how I want to behave than how I want everybody else to behave. It&#8217;s their choice and it&#8217;s not my place to convince people to enjoy something. They&#8217;re on their path and they&#8217;ll discover it eventually(or not). But maybe I&#8217;m overly apathetic. What do you feel are the rewards of reading quality literature?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Time to read teen-fiction by RjZ</title>
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		<dc:creator>RjZ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Apr 2012 19:16:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>First, if people intuitively knew what was bad, Dan Brown would never have become popular.  Of course there is good teen fiction, but my suggestion is that people aren&#039;t even giving themselves the chance to reap the rewards of more dense writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>First, if people intuitively knew what was bad, Dan Brown would never have become popular.  Of course there is good teen fiction, but my suggestion is that people aren&#8217;t even giving themselves the chance to reap the rewards of more dense writing.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Time to read teen-fiction by Aaron Hull</title>
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		<dc:creator>Aaron Hull</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Apr 2012 16:57:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Most of Robert Louis Stevenson&#039;s best known works are probably aimed at teenage boys, but that certainly did not take away from his ability to craft a descriptive passage or characters more interesting than those found in any work of fiction. I was surprised actually that I devoured it so readily as the setting is usually a sailing ship or 19th century England. I feel like a complete jackass not having read them when I was a teenage boy(Kidnapped, Treasure Island and Dr. Jeckyll and Mr. Hyde were all on my bookshelf when I was young but it was only after I got an iphone that I read them) 

Last of the Mohicans was another book I never read as a teenager but was probably aimed at the same demographic. However it took a little more of an effort to visualize the setting.(Although it read quickly enough when there was action or Hawkeye was wearing a bear suit). This probably had to do with the author&#039;s tendency, upon beginning the journey from subject to verb to object, to travel along several other paths of thought, insightful and interesting though many were, before ultimately deigning to conclude the sentence just before it became expansive enough to qualify as a paragraph.

I guess what I&#039;m getting at is that difficulty alone does not make it literature and deciding not to read something because &quot;it&#039;s boring&quot; doesn&#039;t always indicate that the reader is intellectually lazy or too stupid to get it. I tend to believe that most people intuitively know when something isn&#039;t so good. I would say that with all the variety easily available to us, people are less willing to stick with something that presents difficulties unless there&#039;s an outside motivation or no other options. So even the smallest amount of sloppy dense writing will give the reader an excuse to go elsewhere, but they might give less dense material more of a chance.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Most of Robert Louis Stevenson&#8217;s best known works are probably aimed at teenage boys, but that certainly did not take away from his ability to craft a descriptive passage or characters more interesting than those found in any work of fiction. I was surprised actually that I devoured it so readily as the setting is usually a sailing ship or 19th century England. I feel like a complete jackass not having read them when I was a teenage boy(Kidnapped, Treasure Island and Dr. Jeckyll and Mr. Hyde were all on my bookshelf when I was young but it was only after I got an iphone that I read them) </p>
<p>Last of the Mohicans was another book I never read as a teenager but was probably aimed at the same demographic. However it took a little more of an effort to visualize the setting.(Although it read quickly enough when there was action or Hawkeye was wearing a bear suit). This probably had to do with the author&#8217;s tendency, upon beginning the journey from subject to verb to object, to travel along several other paths of thought, insightful and interesting though many were, before ultimately deigning to conclude the sentence just before it became expansive enough to qualify as a paragraph.</p>
<p>I guess what I&#8217;m getting at is that difficulty alone does not make it literature and deciding not to read something because &#8220;it&#8217;s boring&#8221; doesn&#8217;t always indicate that the reader is intellectually lazy or too stupid to get it. I tend to believe that most people intuitively know when something isn&#8217;t so good. I would say that with all the variety easily available to us, people are less willing to stick with something that presents difficulties unless there&#8217;s an outside motivation or no other options. So even the smallest amount of sloppy dense writing will give the reader an excuse to go elsewhere, but they might give less dense material more of a chance.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Time to read teen-fiction by RjZ</title>
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		<dc:creator>RjZ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Mar 2012 22:50:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sure, many books are about escaping to another world. The concern I am expressing here is that there may be better, more satisfying vehicles for that escape. While I haven&#039;t read The Hunger Games, I suspect, young adult or not, it&#039;s quite likely better writing than, say, Dan Brown. As a rule though, exceptions like this one notwithstanding, isn&#039;t it likely that young adult books are written with a simpler plot, character and story telling in mind? Doesn&#039;t the target audience have fewer tools (from experience) to manage a more complex story? And perhaps might a more complex story (if it&#039;s a good, engrossing world) be a better escape than a book made for someone without your skills, knowledge and life experiences?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sure, many books are about escaping to another world. The concern I am expressing here is that there may be better, more satisfying vehicles for that escape. While I haven&#8217;t read The Hunger Games, I suspect, young adult or not, it&#8217;s quite likely better writing than, say, Dan Brown. As a rule though, exceptions like this one notwithstanding, isn&#8217;t it likely that young adult books are written with a simpler plot, character and story telling in mind? Doesn&#8217;t the target audience have fewer tools (from experience) to manage a more complex story? And perhaps might a more complex story (if it&#8217;s a good, engrossing world) be a better escape than a book made for someone without your skills, knowledge and life experiences?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Time to read teen-fiction by Chrissy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chrissy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Mar 2012 22:45:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Who says a good story can&#039;t improve your intelligence regardless of the genre? Regardless, I think its more about escaping to most people. Its not that our lives are too busy for a complicated story, its the fact that its so much fun to engross yourself in another world after a stressful or boring day at work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Who says a good story can&#8217;t improve your intelligence regardless of the genre? Regardless, I think its more about escaping to most people. Its not that our lives are too busy for a complicated story, its the fact that its so much fun to engross yourself in another world after a stressful or boring day at work.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Trade one lie for another by Traveling Hypothesis &#187; Dramatic license or fraud?</title>
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		<dc:creator>Traveling Hypothesis &#187; Dramatic license or fraud?</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Mar 2012 19:58:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] monologue on the air.  It&#8217;s not the first time I&#8217;ve written about stretching the truth.  James Frey&#8217;s million little lies caught my eye even before he was outed. For my part, if, sometimes, it takes me a while to write [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] monologue on the air.  It&#8217;s not the first time I&#8217;ve written about stretching the truth.  James Frey&#8217;s million little lies caught my eye even before he was outed. For my part, if, sometimes, it takes me a while to write [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on What if they didn’t care? by Aaron Hull</title>
		<link>http://rjz.verminbrewing.com/2012/02/01/what-if-they-didn%e2%80%99t-care/comment-page-1/#comment-29770</link>
		<dc:creator>Aaron Hull</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 11 Mar 2012 13:02:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for linking this...some really classy scifi.

I didn&#039;t have quite the same impression of the tone of the book. (perhaps the film reflects that more) And though they didn&#039;t spell things out, they did do a clever bit of exposition in explaining the titular philosophy without making it dreadfully obvious like a Dan Brown. Based on your article I was expected detachment along the lines of Vonnegut. But I didn&#039;t see anything quite like that in the prose. And it was far more straightforward than some of Murakami&#039;s great novels like WInd-up Bird Chronicle or Kafka on the Shore. 

But again, those differences aside there is no denying that this is a very interesting read. Thanks for the heads up.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for linking this&#8230;some really classy scifi.</p>
<p>I didn&#8217;t have quite the same impression of the tone of the book. (perhaps the film reflects that more) And though they didn&#8217;t spell things out, they did do a clever bit of exposition in explaining the titular philosophy without making it dreadfully obvious like a Dan Brown. Based on your article I was expected detachment along the lines of Vonnegut. But I didn&#8217;t see anything quite like that in the prose. And it was far more straightforward than some of Murakami&#8217;s great novels like WInd-up Bird Chronicle or Kafka on the Shore. </p>
<p>But again, those differences aside there is no denying that this is a very interesting read. Thanks for the heads up.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Independent Life by Traveling Hypothesis &#187; Contradictory ideas: personhood and mothers</title>
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		<dc:creator>Traveling Hypothesis &#187; Contradictory ideas: personhood and mothers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Feb 2012 17:43:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] proposed, imagine this, a middle ground, simply by reviewing the definitions of life during pregnancy.  There is something special about [...]</description>
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